Without Merit by Colleen Hoover

This review will contain spoilers.

I have severely mixed feelings about this book. While I was reading it, I quite enjoyed it but since then my rating has dropped and I keep finding new things that went wrong in the novel. There is so much going on in this book and some issues are just not represented right.

First of all what is up with this Syria involvement? The refugee crisis is a serious matter and I got the feeling that CoHo only touched the surface and she sort of inserted it in her book but it was just so wrong. So very very wrong. You can’t mention it once and then move on like nothing happened. If you are going to make it a part of a story then you make it a big part because it’s serious business.

The portrayal of depression in this book is horrific. Yes, the symptoms are listed correctly but then again it feels like the author just googled depression symptoms and then inserted them in her book. And the fact that Merit goes from one extreme situation to the next in a matter of two weeks is literally not possible. You cannot go from attempting suicide to feeling hopeful in a matter of week. You cannot! This was just so awfully portrayed that it gives the impression one can simply shake off depression like it’s nothing. Well, it is something, it’s huge and overpowering and exhausting and YOU CANNOT SNAP OUT OF IT AT ALL MUCH LESS IN A WEEK.

Some comments on the sexuality were just off. I get that Merit is trying to come to terms with the changes in her family but come on, she was just mean and again HAVING DEPRESSION DOESN’T EXCUSE HER ACTING LIKE A BITCH. Her comments on Luck’s sexuality were borderline homophobic. It bugged me a lot.

Sagan was actually lovely though the whole family-is-lost-in-Syria part was off, it should have played a much bigger part in the book. Although I liked the romance part of the book, it was so minor that I really don’t understand why this book is classified as a romance novel. It’s more of a coming of age story.

What I loved about this book were the characters and the family drama. Moby was so adorable and I loved how the relationship between the siblings was portrayed. I also found it fascinating how the whole dad-mom issue was dealt with. That being said I did find it too much to occur in only two weeks. I think the book would’ve worked much better if it took place over a course of several weeks/months.

This books contains so much ideas, too much, if you ask me and I just can’t get pass the whole depression and Syria issues which weren’t handled properly. They deserve a much more in depth approach. Also, the book would work much better if it were longer. The characters and their dialogues was what saved this book from giving it a 1 star rating.

Milk and Honey by Rupi Kaur


Normally I don’t read poetry but since this book has such a hype about it, I decided to make an exception and see what it was all about. To be honest I always consider best-selling books with a certain reserve because I’ve more than once read them and felt like they didn’t deserve the praise they got. The Night Circus for example was one of such books and The Miniaturist. Milk and honey is definitely the next on the list.

Don’t get me wrong, it’s not like I hate poetry, quite the opposite, I think it is magical how poets can express themselves in such a beautiful way but this book just doesn’t feel poetic AT ALL. It’s not the lack of rhymes either, because I love modern poems that don’t rhyme. You can tell a lot in a mere sentence. A SENTENCE. But this here is just, agh, so disappointing.

My friend said to me that the reason why I didn’t like the book is because I’m not in the “right place and time” meaning I don’t know what a break up feels like. Well I also don’t know what it’s like to do magic but JK Rowling made a pretty convincing way of demonstrating it to me. It’s the way this book is written that gets on my nerves.

You probably know what the book is about so I won’t bore you with the synopsis. I absolutely hated how the author kept whining about break ups and men and how she can exist on her own (well obviously not if all you wrote about is men!). You can literally just add music, turn the poems into lyrics and you’ve got yourself a new Taylor Swift album!

Some poems were pretty good, I agree (nothing innovative though, I seriously don’t understand the hype) but most of them were just









Because apparently this is consider poetry.

By the end of the book I got so frustrated, I wanted to flush the book down the toilet! (Which I didn’t because I borrowed it from a friend.) This poetry is supposed to be feministic yet the main theme is problems with men. Could you please stop fixating your entire life on men and start doing something relevant with it? I honestly cannot believe that people actually love this book and feel inspired by it. Please read other poets, Keats for example, and you’ll see what love poetry REALLY IS.

You should see my face right know. Just writing about this book makes me frustrated again.

Point of Retreat by Colleen Hoover


The title sort of summarizes it perfectly. I was very, very disappointed with this book. Lake annoyed me so much that I even considered throwing the book away and while I loved reading from Will’s POV, he was way too cheesy. There are basically only two major things that happen in this book and I hated both of them. Like, I literally rolled my eyes when they occurred and said out loud: ‘Is this for real?’

The story is set one year after the events of Slammed. Lake and Will are both raising their brothers and attending university. They still hang out with Eddie and Gavin and the two kids get a new friend/neighbour Kiersten. Everyone is happy and spending time with each other and then Lake and Will get into a fight, Lake starts throwing tantrums, she basically behaves like a 15-year-old and Will does everything he can think of to get her back. Part two in the book: they get into an accident and Lake is in terrible state. One hospital scene follows the next. The book ends with a not-exactly-a-surprise and we are left wandering what exactly went wrong here?

Will was so immature in this book, he went from being a responsible adult to a confused teenager. All he does is chase after a girl who doesn’t deserve it. Lake, why did you get so upset with what happened? You’ve been dating Will for a year now and then you act like a child? Seriously? The kids saved the book because they were very adorable and funny but Will’s actions regarding Kel and Caulder were uncharacteristic. You don’t threaten 12-year-olds, especially if you are a teacher!

I don’t really know what else to say because I’m afraid I’ll start criticising even more. Eddie and Gavin were lovely and so was Sherry, they made the novel better. The story was focused mostly on Lake and Will but not in a good way like in the first book. I honestly don’t know how the novel got such rave reviews. It seemed like it was mostly written for money and not a lot of thought went into it and that is such a shame because Slammed was really good. There is no way I’m reading the third book, even though it’s mostly about the first one but I just want to preserve the memory of Slammed as it was before I read Point of Retreat.

Love is the most beautiful thing in the world. Unfortunately, it’s also one of the hardest things in the world to hold on to, and one of the easiest things to throw away.

Colleen Hoover, Point of Retreat

Slammed by Colleen Hoover


My first date with Miss Hoover was absolutely sublime; I loved her book! Layken and Will were so adorable, my heart goes out for them. I hated how their romance was pushed aside because of their positions and I rooted for them until the very end. Despite touching some very difficult and troublesome topics, this book had a feel-good quality to it. Family and friends are what makes life bearable and it’s wonderful how this is portrayed in the story.

We meet Layken and Will right at the beginning of the novel. Layken lost her father a few months ago and so her family moved to be closer to her mom’s job. Will is her new neighbour and when their younger brothers become instant best friends, the two become close and even go out on a date. But when Will turns out to be a teacher at Layken’s school, they have to be sensible about it. Too much is at stake. Their romance has to stop, at least for now.

A surprising and harrowing turn of events pushes them back together as Layken has to deal with yet another approaching tragedy. But this time it’s different. She has friends, good friends, and Will, of course. She is no longer a teenager but an adult. And with Will by her side, she can face anything, even the terrible events that await her.

I am currently listening to the Avett Brothers whose lyrics are written at the beginning of each chapter. I wish I’d listened to them while I was reading the book because I finally fully understand what Layken and Will were feeling. Colleen Hoover, this was such a great idea! To connect music and fiction, it doesn’t get better.

What I loved about this book is (beside the romance, of course) the character development. Layken and Will are both flawed, they aren’t all powerful, beautiful and sassy, no, they’re just like the rest of us, faced with obstacles in life that try to pull you down. But they are both so brave and strong and they do what they have to in order to protect their family. Nothing is as important as family and friends. I totally agree.

The next best thing in the book is the slam poetry. It moved me despite the lack of performance. Will was such a talented poet and his words made me want to write again. And Eddie, gosh, Eddie! What a wonderful character! I hope we see more of her in the next book because she makes the best best friend ever.

Okay, so I pretty much just talked about how much I love the book. I did love it but I didn’t adore it. I had some issues with Layken because she seemed to be super angry all the time, especially at Will who already had so much problems of his own and I was so mad at her for giving him a hard time. Also, the way they instantly fell in love with each other seemed a bit far-fetched. And the second tragedy that Layken has to face… seriously? I felt so sorry for her.

I’m not the biggest fan of romance novels but every once in a while I like to read them and this was a great choice. It wasn’t too sappy and predictable; I liked the main characters and want to see where the story takes them. Colleen Hoover is one of the best romance writers I’ve come across so far and I’ll be sure to pick up another of her books soon. I have to finish Layken and Will’s story, right?

Does he treat you with respect at all times? That’s the first question. The second question is, if he is the exact same person twenty years from now that he is today, would you still want to marry him? And finally, does he inspire to be a better person? You find someone you can answer yes to all three, then you’ve found a good man.

Colleen Hoover, Slammed